Dawn,   You present a clear topic:  Can or should  SMS (Short Message Service) be used in the classroom?  You begin in your lit review by discussing the “m learning” and Chinese college.  Then you wrap up your research with a discussion of each.  Good work there.  I like your notion of “anytime/anywhere education.”  You cover lots of ground in your paper.  I also like the comparison to becoming “ebonicized.”  You give good examples from the classroom to the relationship in the middle.  Allof your research points to a logical conclusion.  What conclusion have you drawn?  I didn’t see it in your draft.  You have done excellent work.

Mike